Ok, so it's a decent first draft but you need to go through the brief and make sure you've covered everything listed under task 1. - Your format and style of writing is good so continue this as you redraft - Need to refer to some academic sources, so reference articles about editing that discuss things like the use of the 180 rule or how continuity editing is used
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ReplyDeleteOk, so it's a decent first draft but you need to go through the brief and make sure you've covered everything listed under task 1.
- Your format and style of writing is good so continue this as you redraft
- Need to refer to some academic sources, so reference articles about editing that discuss things like the use of the 180 rule or how continuity editing is used
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